Saturday, 1 March 2008

The Giant's Necklace by Sam

Shorty after their mum went home to make the tea the boys followed and left Cherry at the beach.
There mum screeched, "Where's Cherry?"
The boys exclaimed, "we left her at the beach."
"So go and get her!"
"Ok mum."
So they searched for Cherry. "Any trace?" one of the brothers asked. "No but there are footsteps what's stopped."
"Well better keep going."
"Cherry, Cherry"
"Ok I'l run home and say we've only found footprints."
When they got home the police were there. "Ok mm, police, we've found footprints."
"Well show me then," said the policeman.
"It's here but they stopped"

1 comment:

Mrs H said...

Lot of speech in this one which you has shown you know how to write this. Some good vocabulary too.