As the fuel gauge reached empty, Adam Lyon started to feel edgy. The assengers knew something was wrong. CRASH!!! The plane thudded onto an island full of green with a serene atmosphere.
At this point, Adam Lyons knew there was no way out of this green world.
Twittering noises surrounded him, as mist lingered around reluctantly.
"Arrgh! How could this happen, fate has taken it's place," Adam shouted in dismay.
He knew he'll spend his days living in this endless world. Adam lollaped around until he could not go on any further.
"But I have to go on for the sake of me life." He thought swearing to himself.
There was a shuffling, a racket high up in the trees. It was his father!! Their eyes instantly connected. Adam went to touch him but he just faded away like a holographic figure.
Time went on and on rapidly, that he grew so hungry that he collapsed dramatically on the moist ground. Anxiously, he scavenged for food until he found a garden burstng with life and light. Adam knew that he would live.
Off he went, scoffing his face with fresh fruit like the world was ging to end. At the corner of his pale blue eye he saw something venturing down. He halted at a dark brick wall.
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3 comments:
WOW! Fantastic writing; you've used some powerful vocabulary which makes it exciting to read. You should be proud of your work! 3 chillies!!
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!
Your use of power openers is superb.You create a sense of urgency through careful word choices. I am axious for Adam to find a way out.
Opera Diva
WOW! Have to agree with previous comments fabulous use of vocabulary and can see you've really thought carefully about choice of sentence openers and sentence structure. Seriously envious hope our Year 6 can achieve something as good as this.
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