The Giant’s Necklace by Cassie
As Cherry’s mum(Mr Baxster) just put the last portion on the table, she realised that Cherry was know were to be seen ,therefore she was annoyed, mysteriously she glanced, at the four brother’s, (while turning red) “WHERE IS CHERRY?”
There was no answer “WELL THEN SPEAK UP!” (she grew more and more furious).
“Sorry mum, we did tell her to come home, but she didn’t listen,” they murmured.
“GO AND GET HER NOW!”
“Ok mum,” they whimpered.
The four brothers searched all day and all night, but there were know sign of Cherry - just the sweet smell of her innocence, in the clean oxygen. “CHERRY, CHERRY!” her brother’s called.
“I miss Cherry,” the youngest brother cried.
“Don’t worry, we all do. Just keep hope and we’ll find her,” the other brother replied.
Devastated, they returned home to their depressed parents with a murdered smile on there faces. As they entered there mum’s room she was there in the dark sobbing.
Friday, 25 January 2008
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2 comments:
I like your writing well done!
Some excellent vocabulary in here, well done.
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