The Midnight World by Aydan
In front of me was a dark, dismal and sandy world with just a speck of light. I wondered why this place was so dark and boring.
What was I hearing as I travelled around, still wondering why it was so dark. Was it the bogeyman? I halted for a moment. Thankfully he didn’t hurt me. While we were chatting I met someone else called Master Yoda.
They showed me around; but this was one weird place – it was a cave with skulls hanging down – killed in revenge. I couldn’t believe my eyes.
We travelled to a mysterious castle. It was dark and empty; we crept up to an old wooden door. It slowly creaked open as we entered, slowly and quietly. Staring at the walls.
Somehow we got lost. I found a secret passageway leading into a kind of basement.
SSSOOOMMONE HELLLPP MEEEEE! How stupid – me trapped in my own wretched wardrobe.
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Wow - some fantastic writing on here. I do hope my Year 4s will be this good in the future. :)
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